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A thousand years ago

A church in one of the C12 German states
Wood and iron doors, she pushes passed priests,
A young girl with flaxen hair, blue eyes, pushes
And pushes, sees, briefly, outside, the sun.
Dragged back inside, raped and crucified,
For her paganism, for her love of our old father

Sun. I have drunk a lot of whiskey since she died
Such a terrible death and I can no longer hide
Behind this screen of anonymity.
I have stood in empty spaces and can't begin to say.
I have walked along the winter beach,
With a freezing wind blinding me
Stripped of everything, except wind and sand and sea.
I have looked into the summer sky for her blue-blue eyes
But all I see is gray-clouds a-skimming the houses
Where mummies and daddies rely on each passing day
Not taking their babies away.
And all, all I can say is this is a very long goodbye
But if you could look into my blue-blue eye and say

You would not sigh, nor pass this sadness by,
Stay, to see our holy father sun rise again, today .

 

◄ GLINT

The northern mockingbird ►

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John Marks

Sat 28th Mar 2020 00:06

IT is, very much, my pleasure Keith. My idea is simple: the past, its rights and wrongs, its people and its places, never fades, to those with eyes to see. Thank you very much indeed for your continued support over the years. It is very much appreciated.

“There are painters who transform the sun to a yellow spot, but there are others who with the help of their art and their intelligence, transform a yellow spot into sun”
― Pablo Picasso

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keith jeffries

Fri 27th Mar 2020 23:58

The imagination is stirred by this poem as one is drawn back in time and reminded of what was once of importance and replaced in history by something less tangible.For me it speaks of a continuity which cannot be eradicated. A little abstruse but I hope I have interpreted the poem and done it some honour. It is also a poem which takes the reader to where the writer's mind is.

Thank you for this

Keith

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