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Alonelymouse

Updated: Fri, 1 Jun 2018 01:53 am

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Biography

I write to release my thoughts and emotions. Happy to receive critique!

Samples

"Oh woe is me! No one knows how I feel. How can it be! The pain is so damn real!" Wait. Stop. Calm yourself. Billions of people now Billions of people before Stop to consider how They felt it all and more You probably have it easy A cushy life and people to love For some it isn't so breezey... Their lives are destroyed Just rubble in the void Loss and desperation filled They see their beloved killed Hearts hardened by hatred Minds riddled with fear You should feel rather elated Your life is easy my dear.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 24th Nov 2017 21:10

Aishah, I'll try to catch up with more of your work. I do like your sample - excellent philosophy..



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keith jeffries

Sat 25th Mar 2017 16:55

Aishah, Thank you for some eloquent and powerful verse which speaks of personal pain, frustration, despair and is also a voice for many others who share this predicament. You are skilled as a poet. I have enjoyed enormously each and every poem, for I have read them all. It would be hard to select one but I think ¨Perspective¨spoke to me as it something which troubles my conscience. Thank you again. Please write more, lots more. Keith

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