Thank you Cynthia!

Re : The Notebook- I greatly appreciate your feedback and I would agree now to that last line is questionable considering I wrote this poem 2 years ago. I feel as if my poetry has some kind of melancholic undertone which is usually balanced with its opposite. I hope you can continue reading my pieces and offer any advice. The picture was taken on a beach in Puerto Rico which I highly recommend visiting. Thank you again!

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Welcome, Joseph. Great to have you aboard.

Just a thought re: The Notebook - since all your ideas seemed water/ocean/sea oriented - perhaps something rather than 'burned to a crisp.' could be considered.

If you don't want 'thoughts' just say so. But sharing really is quite fun, and usually beneficial. At least, I have found it so.

Does your photo indicate an island home? I used to live in Bermuda; so anything like 'ocean' captures me totally. I miss it.

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