Howdy again :)
Ta for y'note on Purple - been planning this for a while now. I will be putting that free bus pass (if it still exists when I reach that age) to good use during off-peak times ;D Doesn't do to get caught too many times in the one supermarket!
Oh and as for gigs - yeh, likewise ;p
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Cheers fella, re Unsolicited :)
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I love the musicality you get into these lines without once seeming to strive for it. A very effective tale simply told and made so much more poignant by the mundane details of looking round a bare flat. I'm not sure that the second half is really needed - to my mind, you've said everything you need to say supremely well in your first three stanzas. Great work.
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Thanks Ann & Mark! Glad you enjoyed the poem....
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Fri 6th Apr 2012 15:15
Hi Steve. Been there, done that, mate. Nice one!
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Wow - great poem. Welcome to WOL Steve. I hope you become a part of the site and hope to see you posting a poem (this one?) on the blog section - where they do get more attention. I really found this poem very moving!
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John Coopey
Sat 27th Oct 2012 17:56
Hello Steve.
Thanks for commenting on "Cat Nap".
You're not the first not to recognise my copies!
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