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Gareth Writer-Davies

Sun 27th Mar 2011 11:01

"Somewhere the Sun" I feel expresses in a different way what I was going on about in JUNK.
I really like it-"the poets leapt like tigers/or wanted to" is great and funny : )
I'm in North Herts and am looking for more open mic opportunities-anything doing in Beds?

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Gareth Writer-Davies

Sun 27th Mar 2011 10:57

Thanks for your comments on JUNK
Judging by the time of your posting, perhaps it was more than connecting with you! : D

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Mon 21st Mar 2011 22:10

Some lovely pieces on your profile David, especially liked "Black Night Thing" and "somewhere the Sun"

Liked "Stay with me till morning" too. Wasn't keen on "The Bluest Blues" but then you can't please every one ;) I'm going to have to pop back and have a look at more of your pieces... x

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Tom Harding

Sat 29th Jan 2011 19:43

I've been reading your poems, great stuff. hard and neat. 'somewhere the sun' rolls out beautifully.

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Sat 30th Oct 2010 18:18

David - Crash - for me, the first verse is complete on it's own - Superb! I can see where you're going with the second, but not sure that it adds anything much. Only my 2 cents. B

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Tue 14th Sep 2010 17:34

May thanks for your encouraging words David ,

It seem my 'pink and pretties' are getting as much comment as my poetry which really wasn't the objective, however don't let that stop you... wash day is Mondays.

Thank you so much for your comments and for taking the time to read.

Augusta xx

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Tue 14th Sep 2010 13:03

Hi Dave... A very warm welcom to Write out Loud. Hope you enjoy exploring the site. Winston (New Members)

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