Beautiful - really moving! Don't know how old you are, but hope you didn't get pneumonia! (Facetious comment).

Jennifer

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Thanks Martin, a little introspective moment for me, glad it came across.

J. x

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You certainly took me there with this poem Jason. I was that man laying there.
nice one

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Thanks Ghazala, I'm really pleased that you noticed a musical undertone, I was actually listening to a bit of classical piano when OI wrote it.

J. x

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so beautifully crafted.....enjoyed the flow, the rhythm and the undertone of musical supply within the words embedded to arouse the soul's sleeping urge to rise and finally shine....bravo!!

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