I don't quite get the trousers thing but it sounds comic! Makes me smile! ?
Mae

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On the Jack and Jill thing?
I learned this one when I was a youngster.

Jack and Jill went up the hill to fetch a roll of cheese,
Jack came down with a smile on his face and his trousers round his knees.?

J. x

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Rather a sullen lonesome guy, a solitary non believer who found salvation in love. A tumultuous man who found his zen at the last place he expected! And at the moment he did that inner turmoil calmed. (A bit!)
He's an actual person too! Went to his wedding just the other day!
Thanks fish ?
Mae

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Mae - The Etheree is a non rhyming form. Well done a good read. Each verse also stands alone so you can claim to have written 6 Etherees.
Think he was a glass half empty sort of Hermit? ?
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Normally I'd encourage you to go to rehab myself but it's a sweet-sweet addiction this one! Keep it up !?
Mae

Though Jack and Jill
would like to chill
in the end they will
go up the hill

Though Jack and Jill
always go up the hill
Don Matthews will
use his mad skill
to make them wheel
and roll downhill!
Isn't it about time
We upgraded that rhyme?
So do go on!
My dear friend Don!

Thank you ?

Mae

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Mae I put myself
In so much bloody pain
Trying to upgrade Jack and Jill
Who down the hill they came

Don your bloody hopeless
Although your rhyming's fab
You're overloading system WOL
You need to go rehab

He's hopeless Mae.....

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Thank you dear Jason! I'm enjoying the process!
Dear Don! I tried to make it rhyme after I'd finished but it was very difficult to do it and at the same time keep it from losing its strength and meaning which came in that fateful epiphany-type manner. You don't mess with that! Plus, the verse with the song which is the only part that rhymes would have had no effect at all! Plus, plus, I'm not the awesome rhyner that is Don Matthews! ?
Thank you both! ?
Mae

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Golly gosh almighty
Whatever's going on?
Ether this and ether that
Can you do this Don?

Nah- it don't rhyme......

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This is extremely good Mae, watching you grow as a writer is like watching a flower come into bloom. Excellent.

J. x

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Thanks Devon! It's like I'm learning English all over! I love it! I'll stop by your profile with a new form suggestion!
Cheers?
Mae

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Dang, Mae, this is great and everything counts correctly. Nice work. On to the next challenge!

D

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Thank you Branwell! ?
Mae

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very clever and very good

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