Don't think 'it lacks quality' at all, but is very cunningly written. Really agree with the last two verses in particular. Listening is just not 'cool' nowadays. Don't use the social networks because it seems to me a total waste of time to post venomous invective or one's daily routine.Can't stand the mania for selfies either. Great language!
Jennifer
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I've had this theme in my head for weeks around the number ten (and it also helps that I hate Twitter.)
So apologies if it lacks quality, I just had to get it out, then at least I don't have this nagging internal voice vaguely saying, "Ten, ten, something to do with ten."
J. x
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Jason Bayliss
Sun 5th May 2019 22:10
Thanks Jennifer it took a bit of working out, I wanted to get a, "Ten," in every line and to make the total amount of,"Tens," divisible by ten, (With it being called the power of ten), which is why there are 20 in total. I just found that element of it quite entertaining.
Thanks.
J. x
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