Beautiful, Mae. Every word, but especially:
"...may my love be your iron-wrought, silver-gilded impenetrable shield!"
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You really have outdone yourself here. So beautiful. I'm enthralled.
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Thank you so much sweet Jason! I don't know about perfection but it did come from the heart. ?
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That is just breathtaking Mae. Sometimes we write something that is perfect, for me this is it.
J. x
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So beautifully crafted and full of love.. Superb Mae..
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Thank you so much Keith, Dorothy and Jon! My best friend just had a little girl and I already love her so much! It's my wish for her! Thank you all?
Mae
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Thu 11th Apr 2019 20:27
Mae,
You have really excelled yourself with this poem. I was captivated by every line. Fabulously descriptive and thoughtfully crafted. Very well done.
Thank you
Keith
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Mae Foreman
Wed 24th Apr 2019 09:50
Thank you Frances! Actually that last line was the quintessential of the piece. I had that phrase in my mind and I wove the poem around it!
Thank you for getting my message?
Mae
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