Thanks Rachel - there was no underlying idea other than identifying with the theme, but it's good when you get thoughts about a poem that may add body to it. Glad you liked it.

Ok David, that's a thought! An intrusive mood is ok by me Rachel.

Thanks for stopping by and liking Steve, Jennifer, Jon, Whiskey, Heart of Lead and Dorothy.

Ray

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I appreciate the gag, David..

One of my dad's favorite lines is "stop talking about me"--he obviously brought me up to appreciate fine comedy ;

(Please pardon the intrusion--it must've been the mood last night)

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I sense a proverb in the undercurrent, but dare not disturb this by probing--it's quite the little piece to admire without adding a single word.

Rachel

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