Thanks Jennifer, I think it's the rhythm of it, it was stuck in my mind for ages.?

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Agree with FMF - clever poem - the image it gives is still sticking in my mind.

Jennifer

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Apologies to all, as I mentioned before I'm a bit dyslexic, which means I've had to edit this again because a few words that I thought were there were not (a few "the's and you's). Sorry.
Had to change it because it messes with the rhythm.

J.

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Thank you, the rhythm came to me last night, quite late, had to recheck it this morning to make sure I had the scansion right, so to have nice comments from you is great. I think we've all had a time even if just the briefest when we've felt like this.
Although personally, I was more messy hair and wristwatches myself.

Thanks, ?

J

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Full on confidence. Something about slick hair and steel heels will do that. Great visual licks. ?

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Such a cool, casual vibe to this very clever poem... absolutely loved it! ?

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