Big Sal
Mon 14th Jan 2019 23:03
I like how you chopped and omitted unnecessary words to form a free-flowing poem which ebbed as well as it flowed in rhythmic imagery.
Nicely done, Nigel.?
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<Deleted User> (18980)
Mon 14th Jan 2019 17:21
I got a bit over-excited towards the end...
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Nigel Astell
Tue 15th Jan 2019 14:28
Thanks for that Big Sal
Just the kind of effect I wanted Brian
I will put your name forward Po but no promises to getting you in!
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