I like this Hayley. The way you have positioned the lines (dwell on each before moving on to next). Intrusion/conclusion/illusion perfect end-rhymes. Although 'lose you' is different it carries on the 'oose' sound. I like it. Well done.
Don ?
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HayzTee (Hayley)
Sun 22nd Jul 2018 13:54
Awww thankyou Don ? this one came to my mind suddenly one day so means a lot
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