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Ann Foxglove

Sun 20th Jan 2013 12:08

I love the last three lines especially. Good, spooky stuff!

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M.C. Newberry

Tue 15th Jan 2013 18:13

Chilling and aware - an unsettling nod to our mortality, made even more interesting by the youthful image above the title. This could take its place in any ghost story worth the name!

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tony sheridan

Tue 15th Jan 2013 00:01

Soon to be part of the fabrics of time. Great line.! Great poem! Take care, Tony.

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