"Cleverly spread,"was inded intentional-used to pass the marmite factory on my way to work in Burton upon Trent.The smell was horrendous first thing in the morning -its a by product of the brewing industry,hence why it was based there.

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Naughty but nice , loads of meaning and drama cleverly spread in just a few lines.Well done

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Yes a common occurence when the prize has been won and effort to impress is no longer needed.
I think this would be even more effective without the last line - 'He did'
We know the writer has a lover and the delicious suspense would be more effective.

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