<Deleted User> (6895)
Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:33
very good poem Al.I especially like the line 'a haven of sincerity' lovely! thanks Stef.
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Philipos
Fri 14th Jan 2011 20:32
I enjoyed reading this Alan - in the 4th couplet may I suggest you ditch 'doth' and 'hits' and pluralise the end words for a crisper effect - well done
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<Deleted User> (6315)
Sat 15th Jan 2011 19:04
Oh I did enjoy the feel of this one...yea it left me smiling which is a good thing isn't it? :)
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