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Uilleam Ó Ceallaigh

Fri 17th Feb 2023 12:16

What poverty tastes like?

That your life, or the lives of people you care for are of no, or lesser value, than those of people who are so-called, "sucessful"?

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Adam Whitworth

Thu 16th Feb 2023 14:28

This is an excellent piece. I have no desire to criticise it in any way.

I'd love to strip out the choice ingredients of this dish; they are lost in the sheer bulk of it.
As a believer in the power of lyrical poetry, I'd love to see the irresistible concepts and absolutely delicious lines, of which there are many, out in the open without an obscuring crowd all around.

There is an unforgettable poem hidden here, made of, perhaps, one tenth of the mass as presented.

As you say in your profile Manogna, poems are indeed a great oulet for frustration. Sometimes they can become a valuable work of art as well. I believe this one has that potential.

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Hélène

Wed 15th Feb 2023 13:29

A good, powerful read. Poverty has many faces...money is but one measure. Happiness definitely does not come from money, in my humble opinion. Money can definitely help alleviate suffering, but happiness? Happiness is an inside job that has very little to do with money. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt, thoughtful exploration of suffering across class lines, Manogna. I love the last line, "Please keep fighting." We all need to help & encourage each other, regardless of our economic status.

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