@kieth Jeffries Thank you for the feedback. You are 100% correct there are definitely men that are heartless as well.

I mostly write out of emotion, and also mostly when I am hurt. In the case of this poem it was out of person hurt from the past when my Brother in laws fiance left him a month before their wedding.

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Neill,

This poem is well rhymed and tinged with humour. Some would see it as being a classic example of misogamy but often the truth of one's personal experiences need to be aired. I am sure many men are equally capricious and heartless when it suits them. You can write and write well. I look forward to seeing more of your poems.
Thank you for this

Keith

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