Thank you Stephen. I'm really happy that you took the time to comment, much appreciated. It is one of the poems that I sometimes question why did I write this at all, why did I write it as I did, etc. Because the theme or personal purpose is quite obscure so it didn't really fight its way to be written, it just sort of fell onto the page but over the years apart from a few words here and there it stayed more or less the same. And a bit like a special memory, or song, the more I met the poem the harder it became to work out whether it was truly good or just familiar.

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' a dip in the sand caught a pool of sea ' A wonderful start to a lovely piece of poetry Aviva. ?

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