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Sink into the bible’s words

Tales on a page as old as the wind

 

Crash into the rocks of knowing

Hear the alarm call of birds

 

Taste aniseed and coal

Dream of big bangs, atoms evolving

 

Greet the stranger, take his hand

Feel your body begin to rust

 

Look for the warning signs of death

Let your feet sink into the sand

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John Togher

Wed 21st Apr 2010 10:42

This was taken from a longer piece of work that I edited down. I did try to leave it a little ambiguous.

The longer piece is currently being used as a song with my band John The Baptist. I'll post it up on here soon with the MP3.

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Francine

Tue 20th Apr 2010 22:08

I like the fact that you can read as much meaning into this
as you want to.

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winston plowes

Tue 20th Apr 2010 00:30

Thick and Lovely words you canalmost hold. Win :-)

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Isobel

Mon 19th Apr 2010 21:28

A life without faith is a scary one indeed. I like the starkness of this and the image of bodies rusting...

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jane wilcock

Mon 19th Apr 2010 21:13

Lifes not long enough to find all, is it? I love this thanks, jane

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 19th Apr 2010 16:30

Interesting, a bit of this idea and a bit of that, with enough to make bridges.
I presume you are allowing for extensive 'borrowing' in your claim of biblical tales being 'as old as the wind'. Or do you use 'biblical' in a more austere sense? Still, SPEECH and WRITING are very new in Big Bang Time.

Rachel Bond

Mon 19th Apr 2010 15:39

just my cup o shale. i want to bash my head off some rocks taste some big bangs and stand scary with death like a lighthouse :) i still owe you 1 guiness.

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