Can You See The Ships at Sea

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The darkness finally comes

after a long battle

Two ships sail pass

this ocean blue

Sailing past each other

into the sunset

Keeping my eyes on the blue

it's all I can see

There are no ships for me

◄ You Never Cease To Captivate Me

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Mika

Tue 4th Feb 2020 01:29

Thanks, Don. Sometimes it better to leave it to the reader for interpretation but looks like this one needed help. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

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Don Matthews

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 21:57

Thankyou for explaining this Mika. I didn't have a clue what was going on..

Like Graham I also am drawn into short poems.

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Mika

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 18:45

Thanks, Graham.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 18:24

I am always particularly drawn to very brief work that produces incredible fuel for thought. This is one of those. Heartfelt

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Mika

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 15:06

Cynthia,
This was the poetic response to having 2 deaths in the same week for 2 dear friends. I couldn't see the 'ships' in front of me, only the blue.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 3rd Feb 2020 14:30

You certainly are interesting.

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