Obesity the silent cry

Sitting silent wondering why 

I didn't ask to be born fat

I struggle to get by everyday

i don't want to eat crap food

Please someone take it away

laughter out side the joker me?

look at the fat lady ugly isn't she

pretending I don't hear it I walk

people judge always talk talk talk

the big fat lady can hardly walk

pills don't work not diets I try

year after year this silent cry

love and romance no wants me

too fat for love pass by me

treated like no human a freak

getting nowhere week by week

roll up roll up see the fat lass

off the scales her body mass

The fat lady laughs tears flow

what she truly feels not on show

children mock life so cruel

too far gone to help this fool

a taste on the lips stop please stop

walk more the weight will then drop

good advice do Gooders try in vain

this girls lost the will she is in pain 

save your suggestions comment not

to get away from this mess 

The Fat Lady can't do she lost the plot

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 20th Jan 2020 22:48

Yes, very easy to be taken as autobiographical. No offence meant. However, my comments are valid as is your piece. Being fat isn't about the food! It isn't about the food!

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Brian Maryon

Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:30

Marie - when someone writes in the first person I naturally assume it's personal. Sorry to misunderstand.

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Mon 20th Jan 2020 21:02

Oh my god,this is a Poem just a Poem please dont assume my poems are me I write on a variety of subjects. I feel a little offended This is just a Poem nothing more

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 20th Jan 2020 16:33

I followed my daughter's example and joined her at Slimming World (other dieting organisations are available) and I'm currently on a three stones loss in 21 weeks. she has lost 5 stones over a year.

You have to be ready to go to a place like that and have a support structure too. Our group is like an AA meeting with Stand-up comedy, great fun!

Good luck.

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Brian Maryon

Mon 20th Jan 2020 11:24

Things to avoid...

Burger King
All sugary drinks

How to achieve it...

When you go out don't take any cash or cards

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 20th Jan 2020 10:42

Strong and true and eye-opening. Are you under medical care?

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