To Love or Not to Love?
Open to love,
the biggest risk,
the greatest pain.
Best to go after the wrong thing,
it's the right thing to do.
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Comments
This is a nice piece, short and effective, one thing though, i find it better wen posting one poem at a time, rather than a couple in a row, people tend to comment more, but maybe thats just me, anyway i enjoyed this.
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winston plowes
Tue 6th Apr 2010 23:04
Kealan's right I think. Liked the esscence of this Christopher... Maybe a line space after 'pain.' would give the reader chance to pause before the final 2 lines.Win