mysterious mystic mythical merry-ladybug

you are melancholy
like little wolf loving Little Red Riding Hood

in the pond of the muses' feelings
You are a lily of eternity
which can smell very cute

 

gorgeous gentle genial grasshopper

 

You are graceful

like Sleeping Beauty who likes wild roses
 

in the sea of druidic feelings
you are a silverfish
that can dream

golden graceful glowing glow-worm

you are generous
like the magic ice-admiring Snow White

in the stream of Apollonian feelings
you are an aquatic plant
that can feel better melancholy

all insects have talked dreamed
laughed like a fabulous she-magician

and felt the eternity like king-of-the Alps shrouded in velvet

like fairytale-like seaguall such a buzzard-friend as Erlking's-orphan

Good morning. I want to be as landybird.

Good afternoon. I want to be such a grasshopper

Good night. I want to be like glow-worm

until they by a werewolf:
1) were cooked in the ambrosia = the ladybug
2) were impaled = the grasshopper
3) were poured off in the wax = the firefly

The poetic catharsis of
survived ladybird's tentacle-cell

Oh
you infinite
Friendship of muses
from the magical dreams
who live in the eternity
Feel the druidic melancholy
and even more
the melancholy
mine

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Why is my poem? Because there are:
- the first part built of 3 cherita - each cherita contains alliteration, comparison and metaphor
- the next part is personification
- pictorial elements as well as pictures
- the final part is an experymantal spherical poem with a heart in the middle as
peculiar catharsis
- amazing words ans phrases
- strong adjektives such: gorgeous
- cross rhymes
- cumulative comparisions: such, like, -like, as in an one verse
- the purpose of the poem easy to learn: to arouse pity for insects
- there are no clichés
- vivid images
- old themes
- specific vocabulary