STRANGER THAN FICTION

You touched my hand,

I was a stranger in paradise

stranger than fiction.

Come to think of it,

I don't dwell on them too often,

such moments of benediction.

 

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Paul Sayer

Wed 18th Dec 2019 17:11

Merry Christmas from my house to your house.

You said Ray "Season's greetings and i'll put a word in to the Almighty..."

Ray could you ask her, if she could get me a pair of headphones please.

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raypool

Wed 18th Dec 2019 16:14

Hi Jennifer. I saw that you had been having trouble so it's good to have it sorted, so I'm so pleased you liked this - I find it easier to be brief in words . It's been a while since I posted anything, had other priorities , so thanks for looking in!

Po, your message comes at an opportune time in the calendar. We certainly all need comfort and hope , a good mix indeed!

Glad to be of assistance Don, cheers.

Season's greetings and i'll put a word in to the Almighty.

Ray

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Don Matthews

Wed 18th Dec 2019 03:13

I like short poems Ray. Well done.

Jennifer, don't take this the wrong way but your computer is still a little wonky. It's created a new word which doesn't appear in the dictionary. 'saythat'. On the other hand we could say your telephone company lady has imparted a hitherto new unknown creative streak to your computer. I would encourage it's new talent to take us into the realms of 'unknown' poetry.

What's that? It's just a typo?....

I was just trying to help.......

Trust you to go spoil my fun.....

😎

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Paul Sayer

Tue 17th Dec 2019 20:13

May the God of hope fill you with all joy and peace in believing, so that by the power of the Holy Spirit you may abound in hope.

Ray we all need hope, and the comfort of a little benediction at times.
Po

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jennifer Malden

Tue 17th Dec 2019 17:03

Hi Ray! computer has recovered slightly after 40 mins spent testing its speed with a nice lady from the phone company, so I can now saythat I liked this. Short and with every word perfect, very evocative.Jennifer

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raypool

Fri 22nd Nov 2019 11:11

Thanks Hannah Cait and Afishamongmany for reading


Ray

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