Note to self

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I look in the mirror;

Don't like what I see;

Is that saturnine woman

Actually me?

 

Where is the girl

With a smile that shone?

All grown up;

The smile's long gone.

 

Embittered and cynical;

Forlorn and morose;

Sees only the thorns

-Not the beautiful rose.

 

Note to self:

Need attitude shift!

Life's not a burden;

Life is a gift.

 

 

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Hugh

Thu 17th Oct 2019 09:50

I looked in the mirror it suddenly did crack,
No hope for the future couldn't look back.
But went out immediately and bought a new glass,
Looked forward to the future let what happened pass.

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 17th Oct 2019 09:30

That is a beautiful reminder to us all to be just a little more thankful for our blessings.

J. x

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Chrystel Roberts

Thu 17th Oct 2019 08:22

Thanks Don

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Don Matthews

Wed 16th Oct 2019 22:05

Well done Chrystel.....nice rhyming

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Chrystel Roberts

Wed 16th Oct 2019 21:53

Thank you for your comment Ruth...

Best regards

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 16th Oct 2019 12:35

Great piece Chrystal a positive outlook will always bring out the youthful side!

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