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Lie in wait

Feel the restless winds
they blow,
across my shallow grave.

Mud streaked and blood
spattered,
I lie beneath the dirt.
Waiting to be found.

My naked corpse is cold
and my flesh is somber.
My  dead eyes glare
recrimination.

Grass grows and leaves drop,
winter snow blankets.
And still i wait.

◄ New found freedom

Bluebell Wood ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (6895)

Sun 28th Mar 2010 22:11

Good evening Kath-some people have probs etc with sad poems-me?-no way,I,m open to all aspects of life and death-poetry(I think)has to include all.Sombre image this poem,but well worded-re my comment on being regretful about the past-I have two poems done quite a bit ago-on sameish subject-apologetic to family etc-would love your opinion-one called'Tonight Matthew'-and-'Went the day well?'if you prefer not-absolutely no probs-whenever you like-thanks-Stefan-x

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