incessant

flotsam to jetsam 

life ebbs to the pull of time 

incessant decay

past fills with the futures

wave of actuality

◄ midnight

sun and moon ►

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DESMOND CHILDS

Wed 6th Nov 2019 06:22

Thank you po, much appreciated you saying so.

All the best des

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poemagraphic

Tue 5th Nov 2019 20:58

Hi Desmond

Some poets run on incessantly
Leading ‘in my case’ to metaphysical indigestion.

Saying so much in so few words my friend...
is terse verse.

Enviably
Po

DESMOND CHILDS

Thu 3rd Oct 2019 20:36

Thank you Martin for your kind words much appreciated. I too do wish, that one day I will write longer poem. Hopefully as good as you. Don, I too like haiku as well as senryu and tanka I think they make you slow down and take a different view on everyday happenings that we would otherwise take for granted. Thank you Keith and Avishek for the likes

All the best des

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Don Matthews

Thu 3rd Oct 2019 09:14

To me the art of poetry is putting an idea into as few words as possible. Why I like haiku. And it's challenge......

Not easy, as you say Martin....

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Martin Elder

Thu 3rd Oct 2019 08:42

I sincerely wish I could be a man of so few words when it comes to writing . Wonderfully put Desmond
Nice one

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