elucidate

Monday 2nd September 2019 6:21 pm

in this moment
in the spaces between these atoms
vibrations shifting
harmonics in phase

85...85...79...85.55..
..........55........79..89.89.....
..233..137......233...233.377...144....377....
235...235............144...............366..377.......................
.......444..................................................
a keen shaft of breathing light
penetrating this organic maze

ten millions of tendrils wrapped around
pierced throughout immersed in sound
singularity perceived in this exquisite note
the key

reaching through magnetically
the ballast at my core

in this moment
along the path there is nothing random nothing more

in this moment
I am whole

Comments

Martin Elder

Sat 7th Sep 2019 09:29

I am with you in this Rachel aside from the political nonsense that goes on and there is plenty of that going on right now, there is this whole ethos around producing and consuming. Consuming being the operative word here in that we are asked to consume anything that is put in front of us not least the rhetoric that is espoused by the loudest voices.
I look forward to more of your work
Thanks for posting

Martin

elPintor

Fri 6th Sep 2019 20:00

An idea that can't be expressed in words? The German language may have a word for this phenomena, Jason--I've heard it said that they have a word for everything...

And Martin, I get the feeling that there really isn't much thinking going on within the general population. I mean, we are all told how to think. And, by telling us how to think, "the powers that be" also dictate our rebellion.

Our division is orchestrated--never believe that it is less than calculated.

Train your mind.

Martin Elder

Thu 5th Sep 2019 19:51

Rachel
I always love the fact that your poetry make the reader think rather than just swallow up a whole load of words. Great poem proving there is so much creativity in science.
Nice one

Jason Bayliss

Tue 3rd Sep 2019 08:41

If anything, the fact that you're reaching for something you can't explain as well, just adds to why I like it.

J. x

elPintor

Tue 3rd Sep 2019 05:05

Hi Jason,

There's something here I can't express in words. I'm not sure this is the best way to put it on paper, but it seems to fit in a certain way.

Thanks for your response )

Rachel

Jason Bayliss

Mon 2nd Sep 2019 18:27

I'm going to have to read this a few times, just because it's really interesting. The use of a chain of numbers in the middle just adds something... I can't quite put my finger on it, but I really like it.

J. x

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