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Pocket Full Of Lint

Good intentions, and a pocket full of lint,  All her favorite things combined was her inspiration and date night hint. What could she possibly bestow to him, she would have to formulate with her creativity within. With only an idea and a few bucks, her easy going nature and sweet simplicity is her luck. She has something sweeter up her sleeve then ice wine, over a whimsical fire they shall dine.  Embraced with each other in their cozy cloths, hidden by trees in multiple rows. She May not have hundreds for five star, but an idea and a campfire meal and tent she can fit in her car. She May not have alot of coins to share or spend, But she has something priceless, which is her heart and non refundable time to lend. 

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Don Matthews

Sat 31st Aug 2019 04:32

Never be too shy to share your work Amanda. Never ever. I know it takes courage, particularly if you're a newcomer. I really am harmless. Jason will attest to that. Won't you Jason?....

The bottom line is you basically write for yourself, in the way you are comfortable and happy with. If others like it fine. If not? - still fine. Well that's the way I work.... ?

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Amanda Ann; ❤

Sat 31st Aug 2019 02:17

I am dyslexic as well, however I love writing and playing with words. I just became brave enough to share my work. thank you for your comment. -Jason Bayliss?

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 30th Aug 2019 17:31

Loved it, and yes it is priceless. I also know what Don means. For me it's because I'm dyslexic, it doesn't mean I can't read it, it just means it's more difficult. Great poem though and whoever, "He," is he should think himself lucky ?.

J. x

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Amanda Ann; ❤

Fri 30th Aug 2019 17:24

Hmmmmmm good idea ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 30th Aug 2019 13:45

Amanda, have you thought of putting it into stanzas? I find it hard to digest all in this linear fashion. But that's just me......

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