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I need a drink of water. I love you.

I love a drink of water. I need you.

I need a drink of you. I love water.

I love a drink of you. I need water.

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◄ Tried, I did.

and i begin to fade ►

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Eiren Water

Sat 24th Aug 2019 11:22

Wow you all humble me with your thoughtful comments

e. xxx

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Don Matthews

Wed 21st Aug 2019 23:26

I write these words right down. Cos I want to
I want these words down. Cos I write them
I, them words, write down. Cos these words want to
But words want to write up. Not down

Tried, I did....

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Ruth O'Reilly

Wed 21st Aug 2019 23:06

This reminds me of Masaru Emoto's water experiment where the glass of water apparently developed beautiful snowflake like crystals from having a message of love underneth it.

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