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BLANK SLATE

It'll take the breath clean out of you

When you think the implications through

Tabula Rasa: blank slate

No memory, no desire,

Nothing to bend you in any direction,

Nothing to send you lower or higher

No future envisaged

No presience required

No past to regret

Nothing for sale and nothing to let

No genetic predisposition

No-one to speak and no-one to listen

A new human. Being is all.

Not doing, not making, nothing to recall.

High windows in an empty hall

Setting off in free-fall.  

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◄ Paralysis

Mater mea ►

Comments

Devon Brock

Fri 28th Jun 2019 23:05

Yes, John, the build up to the final two lines. The pressure and release structure of the whole poem is wonderful.

D

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