For Always
For Always
For always you swore,
Until the end of time,
Could anyone love me more?
Know, you told me so.
You slipped away,
One day,
Unbeknown with my best friend – do I wish you well?
Comments
Thank you, as always, for reading this piece and taking the time to comment. I'm afraid it's a very cheeky piece, reflecting both emotional extremes of being in love. Tip - try reading it vertically ?
Devon Brock
Fri 28th Jun 2019 11:36
When read aloud, "know" becomes "no". The whole weight of this poem rests on that methinks - great job, Eve.
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Devon Brock
Fri 28th Jun 2019 21:09
Haha - Eve. I didn't even notice!