Come in to the kitchen she said with a strong voice
"look at that floor!"
what is wrong I asked?
Its filthy she screamed,
sensationally I replied
"Look at that floor!"
get a broom and make this house into a home
fearing my life I did as she said
later, she called me into the lounge
and with a strong voice
"look at that floor!"
what is wrong I asked?
suckering suckatatz! its unholy and unhomely,
to which I sensationally replied
"look at that floor!"
your welcome! its come out of a joke between mates, he worked at a casi and the cleaner would walk around saying "look at that floor" in a high pitched, irish accent!
<Deleted User> (4281)
Sun 10th Feb 2008 08:00
Hello Richard,
Such life. You have expressed life as it happens.
Floor can get that way at times. It is strong commanding poem.
"fearing my life I did as she said
later, she called me into the lounge
and with a strong voice
"look at that floor!"
what is wrong I asked?
suckering suckatatz! its unholy and unhomely,
to which I sensationally replied
"look at that floor!"
Interesting twist in the conversation.
Thank you...Zuzanna
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<Deleted User> (4281)
Mon 11th Feb 2008 16:29
Richard,
The poem you created it's interesting. Just to write something out of a comment...That's very clever! It brought a smile on my face reading this...Zuzanna