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close your arms around me
help me belong here in
this passing moment
I know I
belong
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For me it is simply beautiful Rachel
Love it
elPintor
Wed 12th Jun 2019 18:02
if only simple pleas were so simple, Ray--never beg for something that's free
mostly people understand emptied spaces
and obstacles
blast em out
notch them out with words and ink
let erosion find the shapes of them
in the rock of time
they are still absences all the same
meh
..sorry, man--it's an obvious paradox but I'm feeling a bit the nihilist.
Cheers, anyways, to you and the kindness of your comment )
Rachel
Lovely in its simple plea, that to belong can be reinforced by someone's true caring. You have hit an elegy sweet spot Rachel. We should all learn to carve out such truths.
Ray
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elPintor
Wed 19th Jun 2019 09:53
Thank you, very kindly, Martin )
Rachel