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Us and Them

- "Sin" is a fearsome word, shameful, effective and frightening.

  "Crime" is only good for bad poets, good lawyers and judges.

  And a child's protest is such a typical and unimportant thing

  It's as common as a sorrowful letter's tear and ink smudges.

  An infant's cry is natural and anticipated. No reason for alarm.

  And "course of life" we casually name the old man's demise.

  Addicts die on the streets; one mouth less, what's the harm?

  But for me and you, oh, raise our sorry whimpers to the skies!

 

And I wonder, who really is "us" and who is "them"?

Have we not been sinners, have we not committed crimes?

Have we not been frustrated infants and little children?

Have we not suffered the uncertainty of the thinning of time?

Were you and I born as important wise men and women?

Have we not broken the hearts of those whom we cherish?

And are we so very "significantly more signicant", then...

...that we may never grow old and perish?

 

 

-Yet, I cried and I begged and not a soul dared to cry: "Sin!"

Take down the powers that be, will be and have always been?

Unborn is who shall stand up and fight that ancient crime

Therefore I shall never spare or be spared a single dime

For it is I who is the harmed and I who is the neglected

I am the shunned,I am the ignored and I am the rejected

I am the addict and I am the pauper in the streets dying

I am the mother, I'm the sick, I'm the lunatic and I AM trying!

 

But my tongue is arrid, I can't be heard and my arms and legs are too short

And I have no home and I have no future and I have no passport

I am the battered and I am the bludgeoned and I am the bereft and tattered

And I shall live and I shall die and I will still have never mattered.

◄ Before Life Begins

Meaning Lost ►

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Mae Foreman

Sat 8th Jun 2019 10:24

Dear Jason, you have a brilliant mind! Insight too! Everything you said is exactly what I felt when I wrote that piece.
Thank you my friend ?
Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Fri 7th Jun 2019 23:36

It's almost a question asked of the mirror.

If someone performed it on a stage I'd have them with their back to the audience but talking to themself in a full length mirror.
So the audience watched them talk to themself while their mirror image talked to the audience in the dark.

J. x

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Mae Foreman

Thu 6th Jun 2019 16:01

Thank you dear Fish! Though in writing "unborn is he who shall stand up and fight that ancient crime" I didn't have any "savior" of any type in mind. It was my, perhaps unfortunate, way of saying that nobody ever dares to defend the weaker and less fortunate; but if you see something beyond what I see in the piece, good! That's why we write publically. And most of the times the reader's interpreteation goes deeper than the intention of the writer!
So thank you for liking, and thank you for the support ?
Mae

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afishamongmany

Thu 6th Jun 2019 15:08

Ah Mae! So much in this. So much visceral emotion. So much pofftness, anger, despair(?).
This-
"Unborn is who shall stand up and fight that ancient crime"
- don't despair He was born and lives.
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Mae Foreman

Thu 6th Jun 2019 10:16

I'd like to think you are right dear Dorothy! A beacon of wisdom and tenderness as always!
Thank you for everything ?
Mae

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Thu 6th Jun 2019 10:12

Mae

Don't be "pissed off" you are lively - relevant - thoughtful - funny,
pissed off does not fit.

Dorothy

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Mae Foreman

Thu 6th Jun 2019 07:11

Thank you dear Jon! ?
Mae

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 6th Jun 2019 06:50

Love this, Mae

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Mae Foreman

Wed 5th Jun 2019 20:34

Thank you dear Dorothy! ?
I'm quite pissed off as I write, I think that did it! Thank you ?
Mae

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Wed 5th Jun 2019 20:33

Mae
this is wonderful
'and are we more "significantly more significant" '

just wonderful

Thank you.

Dorothy

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