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I loved you

I loved you 

From the moment I saw you

Black beanie 

Brooding 

Cigarette hanging from the side of your mouth

Dripping in hurt and cynicism

You

My imperfect reflection

 

We spent days in bed

Hid from the world

Made our own

 

You were the light in my darkness

The first to really see me

The first to truly love me

What you gave me I'd never had before

 

Now you're gone

You took my heart with you

divorceheartacheLove lost

◄ A Letter

Soul Sister ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (21818)

Sat 18th May 2019 14:26

Nice poem. Heartbreaking words which so many can relate to. I sense real heartbreak; time does heel all wounds. Thank you. Jane?

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