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Beyond the Blue

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How do mermaids spend their leisure

when not to seamen granting pleasure?

In Neptune's kingdom join the court

or glide to some exotic port?

 

On glistening strands we find the trace

of their delicate foamy milkwhite lace.

They polish pebbles to use as jewels

with turtles as their crafting stools.

 

Freeing oysters from their pearls

thread them through hair in lovely whirls

admired in brilliant fishscale glass

unworried that their beauty pass.

 

They wander in their fluctuating

cool green sunlit captivating

Poseidonia  meadow garden

mutineers' skulls left there to pardon.

 

Build palaces adorned with shells

anemones, coral and sunk ships' bells,

with eviltempered moray eels

to snarl whenever a belltongue peals.

 

Keep rainbow fish as ornament

to gaze and make their hearts content

seahorse in tiny seaweed cages

and octopus for eightarmed pages.

 

Repose on spongy beds so soft

with man-of-war tentacles  hung aloft

protection from marauding shark

roving predators of the dark.

 

Sometimes count doubloons they find

in pirate chests been left behind.

Race with dolphins on the crest

of warmer seas towards the west.

 

Childlessness their only sorrow

they live with no thought for tomorrow.

◄ Hopeless

Four Limericks ►

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jennifer Malden

Fri 10th May 2019 16:38

Thanks Martin, Wolfgar and Jon for the likes, and Jason and Jane for th comments. Glad you all found something to like in it. I had fun writing it anyway. Admit to being an aunt, but not Victorian and no maiden!!!

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Thu 9th May 2019 04:33

An exquisite poem; rich with beautiful imagery! I loved it!??

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 8th May 2019 22:28

That is really beautiful Jennifer. I love the flow of it. And the last line is bitter sweet.

J. x

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jennifer Malden

Wed 8th May 2019 17:04

Thanks Vautaw and Ray! Agree about the water babies- it is slightly Victorian maiden aunt stuff, but it just came into my head and flowed along! Glad you liked it. Jennifer

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raypool

Wed 8th May 2019 16:54

A beautiful poem flowing through the mind like a trail of thoughts - captivating and joyous, with lots of quite childlike imagery . I like the fact it has no sting in its tail and retains a credibility that' s delightful. Reminds me of the Water Babies by Charles Kingsley, a children's book from 1862.

Ray

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 8th May 2019 16:52

I love mermaids and I love this poem. Thanks for sharing Jennifer! ?‍♀️

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