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Grail

A soup of earth, gloating thick against a sprint,
slues the archaeologist, and ranks a shadowy elbow
above head and heart,
 
trilling, thrilling, distilling vocalyptic egos
traipsing on severed toes beguiling
 
a patterned plateau to follow.
 
Some calluses can be Creationists; strapping laughter
on a cello, a handsome young devil in the shroud of armadillo
or the sting of argument
 
 spacing
 
 a spectacle for a Spartacus, pumping the voice for fists,
adhesive for a chest
fat for winter
 
and wrapping up gifts; grinning spades that furrow
marionette hairs
wafting up from the ground,
 
decking tomorrow with laurels
 
of ever distant liquor.

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Ann Foxglove

Mon 1st Mar 2010 09:55

I am intrigued by this. The middle got me a bit lost, but I enjoyed reading it again. Are you or have you ever been an archaeologist I wonder. You sound like a poetic archaeologist!

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Marianne Louise Daniels

Mon 1st Mar 2010 09:06

It can be both. I am choosing to remain vague...

I suppose it is abstract, i don't have a problem with that tag.

Thankyou for reading.

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 28th Feb 2010 17:13

I see more every time I read this.

'Grail' as simply a 'container'? Or a 'spiritual receptacle' such as LIFE itself? Or What?

Marianne, do you refer to this style broadly as abstract poetry?

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