Note with Note

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sacred history transpired 

Once upon a time, ages ago

The jolly whistling humming tune-bird

flew over to the hastily scribbled timid note-bud.

He fluttered around her in circles and chirped and wooed her! He sung

a crimson ribbon to life and tied it around her neck and cooed and purred!

And Her, the little blue note kissed the sound with her indigo-blue, ink-drenched

lips and wore her bonny ribbon with pride and grinned! And then- in the blink of

an eye thunder and lightning broke!  Note with note merged into one art,

one piece of parchment, one feisty, unanimous panhuman tongue.

And the tongue spake loudly and said: "Let it be known,

who does not know the figures of letters,

who will not fathom written words,

The children, the busy, the blind

shall hear them be sung

and know

all !

◄ Rite of Passage

Dread of the Dream ►


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Mae Foreman

Wed 8th May 2019 19:24

Thank you so much Martin! ?

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Martin Elder

Tue 7th May 2019 20:58

This definitely has a song like quality to it.
Nice one

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Mae Foreman

Fri 3rd May 2019 09:10

Thank you Jason! I'm really glad you like it! I had never tried this kind of formatting before but it kinda works?

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 2nd May 2019 22:58

That's the third time I've read this and I have to say I love it.

J. x

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