Tanka ?

Within my grave

Twisted upon my face

The smile of death 

As you slip away

Forever silent in my night

◄ Mind

Senryu/Hailku ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Fri 26th Apr 2019 07:06

Hi Steve thanks for your comments, much appreciated. I am planning to do some research into tanka etc, so thanks for the advice. Glad you liked the poem.
Thank you Mae for the like.

All the best des

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