Quintessential
The only thing
I did that mattered at all
in this wretched life
was that time
I held you in my arms!
Comments
To be honest I liked it both ways.?
J. x
Thanks Steve! It does look and sound better this way! ?
Mae
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Mae Foreman
Wed 24th Apr 2019 22:05
You know, I like the three line structure preferably with no rhyme, in various rhythms and forms. I feel it gives me creative freedom! I call them "haiku" but I shouldn't because they don't comply with the haiku rules, so Steve is right. In fact I erased the word "Haiku" from the titles of all the three lined poems I've written and in some the five line structure works better!
Thanks for your support, always kind, dear Jason?
Mae