Ending

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I want it to be over

The voices in my head 

Telling me to end it

And let go of everything I’ve dreamt

 

I want it to be over

The feeling that I’ve dread

The endless loop to stop

I don’t want to be afraid

 

I want it to be over

I want to start again 

This time no voices 

This time I’ll put an end.

dark

◄ Guilt

Gone ►

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Charlotte Thomas-Rowe

Mon 29th Apr 2019 00:26

I absolutely love it

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Ged Thompson

Sat 27th Apr 2019 07:30

Good Write X

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John Marks

Fri 26th Apr 2019 23:18

Sometimes, I feel besieged by conflicting voices telling me what I should have done or should do or should have said or written or thought,. Bah! now I just dismiss them as clap-trap and do as I will or must.

On a day — alack the day! —
Love, whose month is ever May,
Spied a blossom passing fair
Playing in the wanton air.

Will Shakespeare, Sonnets to Sundry Notes of Music, II.

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 24th Apr 2019 09:06

This is dark Ana, but deeply expressive. I hope you're speaking figuratively though, rather than an, "End," this would seem like a good beginning. I hope you will share more with us.

J. x

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