Three Senryu (I think)

The penny’s that drop

Resonate in the cavern

Of what we have lost

 

There are no phantoms 

Just ghostly consequences 

Of past endeavours 

 

With breath there is life

With life there is awareness 

With awareness, self

◄ Crimson

Wind Birds ►

Comments

DESMOND CHILDS

Thu 11th Apr 2019 21:46

Thank you Steve for the feed back, I’m glad you enjoyed my Senryu. I feel I am drawn to this short form of poetry and will definitely be looking into the British Haiku Society.


all the best des

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