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out for drinks with mates

bunch of rebrobates

having long debates

then in bed till noon

 

bangin’ in the head

wishin’ I was dead

curing it instead

at the greasy spoon

 

stepping on a plane

sunny week in Spain

money down the drain

every year in June

 

getting nicely tanned

sangria in hand

listen to a band

with a bangin’ tune

 

magical first date

when we resonate

walkin’ very late

‘neath a harvest moon

 

ribbing from the blokes

lots of childish jokes

meeting with her folks

Sunday afternoon

NaPoWriMo Day 9

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Laura Taylor

Wed 10th Apr 2019 09:16

Fab! Totally in synch with the original ?

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Don Matthews

Tue 9th Apr 2019 23:35

This rhyme is interesting
For what it does forth bring
Stalking Brian in the wings?
Ring-a-ding-a-ding ?

<Deleted User> (18980)

Tue 9th Apr 2019 17:52

Have you been stalking me Trev?

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Trevor Alexander

Tue 9th Apr 2019 16:32

Title with a nod to Ian Dury.

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