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Queuing For Love

I'll take all your negative feelings
Trade them for positive love for you
You can push me around 
Twist me until I'm blue

Your voice is the comforting echoes I need again
I'm not as patient as I come off to be
This lonely road has got to me more then once
I've never admitted that out loud

I was coasting through life until I met you
The first sight of you took all my air
You had a five finger discount to my heart
I fell into your arms so swell

Expensive tasting liquor
One taste and I'm a love bug crying for you 
I'm not as patient as I come off to be
But I'll always be loving when it come to you

◄ The Oath I Made

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victoriavautaw@gmail.com

Wed 27th Mar 2019 14:51

"You had a five finger discount to my heart." Love that line. Great poem. Thanks for sharing. ❤

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