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4.10.2018

I will take her sorrows to my grave,

I let her grow into me,

Much more than i let him.

Saw her walk on glass

So she could be saved

Sometimes i feel her bones cracking

Between us,

Like an undeniable pressure

She steps on my chest

And it all happens only

Within my body;

Love does not exist above you,

Love is crawling in the cracked bones,

And her sorrows are pounding,

Instead of my own heartbeat.

 

 

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anamaria

Tue 26th Mar 2019 21:40

@elPintor oh wow, i wish i could say or do something more than just say thank you for your comment, but honestly, i am in shock. Thank you. So much.
(I will also take the time to carefully read more of your work, i already checked some, but time has always been my enemy sadly)
Much love!
Mila

elPintor

Sat 23rd Mar 2019 08:58

For me, this is an exceptional piece of writing. I read through each your posts and was emotionally moved by them--it's a fairly rare experience and deserves a note of recognition.

Thank you,

Rachel

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