The Cracked Pot

As she cracks, water

Gushes from her open veins

To nourish new growth  

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Hazel ettridge

Thu 21st Mar 2019 17:24

Thanks for commenting Kate, Don and Binte. I think I could have removed a couple of words but then it would just have been, well, a sentence?

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Binte Afroz

Thu 21st Mar 2019 15:07

Well, the beauty of your poem lies in its brevity. Thanks for sharing

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Don Matthews

Thu 21st Mar 2019 12:35

Such is the ability of a good haiku Kate

Kate G

Thu 21st Mar 2019 09:12

How did you pack so much into these three little lines. Very, very significant for me right now. Love this.

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