The Cracked Pot
As she cracks, water
Gushes from her open veins
To nourish new growth
Comments
Well, the beauty of your poem lies in its brevity. Thanks for sharing
Such is the ability of a good haiku Kate
<Deleted User> (19913)
Thu 21st Mar 2019 09:12
How did you pack so much into these three little lines. Very, very significant for me right now. Love this.
If you wish to post a comment you must login.
Hazel ettridge
Thu 21st Mar 2019 17:24
Thanks for commenting Kate, Don and Binte. I think I could have removed a couple of words but then it would just have been, well, a sentence?