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i want to touch you
and taste you
and feel you inside.
i want to screw you,
seduce you,
take charge and ride.
i want to lick you
and suck you
and throat you in one.
i want to tease you
and please you
and make you hold on.
i want to bind you
and blind you
and ride you again.
i want it harder and deeper
until i am spent.
<Deleted User> (7073)
Sun 14th Feb 2010 23:37
Yep it's hot... that's why so many blokes are commenting ha ha...(me too ;-) Good poem too though ;-))TC XX
Definitely very daring of you to put this up here Kath! Next thing you'll be telling us you want to get up on stage and read your poems out! ;-) I like it though, I love the way it's got such an intimate subject matter but a great little rhythm to it! Your example almost made me put my 'carnal' poem on here, almost, but I just don't have the moxy for that just yet! :-)
Maybe Darren's one of those men who knows the difference between a penis and a bonus....the wife will always want to blow your bonus!
: )
Jx
Not odd if you know Darren LOL! Also I'm guessing that not all married women are as hot as you Cynthia...I'd like to comment on certain lines that I particularly like but I daren't in case I give too much a way! I do like the way the last line doesn't tie in to the rhyme pattern - it makes it stand out - spent being the anti climax. A very bold and daring poem - as is the photo.
It's very good, Kathryn. The rhythm and rhyme plunge on like a roller coaster, with "Bolero' in the background. Why on earth would anyone suggest you're not married? Odd comment, that. And whom are you likely to offend?
<Deleted User> (7483)
Sun 14th Feb 2010 13:13
Nice poem. Short, tight and precise. The balance is right!
<Deleted User> (7164)
Sun 14th Feb 2010 13:12
Screw away Kathryn!
Hope you don't mind but some of the lines in this suggest to me that it could have been written FOR a woman OR by a woman for a woman?
Maybe it's the difference in language people use depending on where they come from, I don't know. :-)
I do like it though.It feels great to be in control and yes. Very carnal. Whooo! Hot!
Janet.x
darren thomas
Sun 14th Feb 2010 12:20
My money says 'you're NOT married'.
Ah well, as my granny always said, 'I want, never gets'!
:)
Jx
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sun 14th Feb 2010 08:58
I once had a girlfriend who was just like this - it was brilliant! sadly she was also totally off her trolley. great poem.
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<Deleted User> (6353)
Tue 16th Feb 2010 19:52
There should be no apology with this - great one to post on Valentine's day! Why bother with hearts and flowers when you can have a good hard shag? lol :-)