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Autumn

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I shuffle through the brown and crispened leaves.

I gaze at newly naked boughs above.

I shudder in the biting eastern wind.

I pine for summer days that we so love.

 

You point to lightest gold and burnished red.

You show me leaf buds, tightly closed for spring.

You lead me past the shrubs, still full in bloom.

You fill me with great hope that time will bring.

 

My jaded eye revived through child's view.

Your vision of rebirth you gave to me.

Our futures short and long will now be shared.

The generation leaps to promise fresh.

Skipped season previews growth anew.

◄ Three Times a Virgin

A Walk Along the Severn Way ►

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<Deleted User> (5984)

Wed 6th Feb 2008 13:23

The colours that you evoke in this poem are very evocative and fit perfectly with the title of the poem. I love the imagery of 'my jaded eye', as it works on so many levels.

Mel
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<Deleted User> (4281)

Wed 6th Feb 2008 02:16

Hello Malcolm, welcome back!
Glad you returned and you brought new poem for me to read. The leave reminds of a Autumn, or the phase of another year when the trees loosing their leaves getting ready for winter. I guess the dreams of spring are closely in your mind. Great write!

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